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    dots Submission Name: gesticulationsdots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 945



    Description:
       sorry, know its been forever since I have written and this is obviously not very good. but yeah just some thoughts going through my head when i was out at this club. thinking about the subcontious and how it plays a role in everyday life and about relationships and stuff. yeah see what other things you can get out of it.


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    He scratches
    His chin. She rubs
    Her eyelids,
    Trying to exentuate
    What isn’t there
    He touches her fingers
    The tips screaming forth
    Gently caressing hands
    Like an aura of emotions
    And mixture of passions
    Soft, smooth, beckoning
    To be brought closer
    Neither to be held
    Nor to be kept
    But to be known
    Not noticed

    He scratches his chin.
    She scratches hers
    As the brain yelps
    In disgust as pain
    As inhibition is lost
    And doubt regained
    They don’t take notice
    Of the fingers touching
    Of the hands caressing
    Because it is faint and unattractive
    To their overall distressing
    They push and pull without
    Refrain. They yell and scream
    For one small faint.
    Too weak to stand
    Too strong to sit.
    Proud. Proudly in doubt.




    Submitted on 2007-09-21 09:40:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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