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    dots Submission Name: Prometheus Risingdots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 29/60/51
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 162
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1505



    Description:
       This is a gangsta rap song I wrote in the wee hours of last night. The lyrics appear on the surface to be bad, they are actually Sufi-esque proverbs that I wrote in a modern context, these are actually some of my favorite lyrics, so try and read between the lines.

    Inspired by Robert Anton Wilson's Prometheus Rising, New Falcon Publications


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    dotsPrometheus Risingdots
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    I gots the totem poles
    The call me tha shaman
    Stayin' alive with Watsons and clumped ramen
    'N' when I smoke a blunt I still get high
    Shiftin' baggies on the fly, niggas buy 'em by the five

    'Cuz I'm the fuckin' master that makes the grass green
    I'm the cosmic director of this goddamn scene
    Make you take off your clothes like you was Ishtar
    'n' pimp out my car
    'Cuz it's all masks 'n' I'm good at takin' 'em off
    I make reality turn its head and cough
    Yeah I know the trick so you'll suck on my dick

    You know why, you know it's why I get all the bitches

    Bitches, dope and pounds, you know I got 'em
    Quarters on the ground, know I can spot 'em
    Bitches, dope and pounds, you know I got 'em
    Quarters on the ground, know I can spot 'em

    This a'int no joke to me
    Perception is reality
    Try if I might to make appear a satellite
    To this egocentric world, a beautiful girl
    But if I keep sight and my mind set is right
    She'll stand before me on all fours, adoring
    This a'int no joke to me
    Perception is reality

    I see Prometheus Rising
    I see Prometheus Rising
    I see Prometheus Rising
    I see Prometheus Rise




    Submitted on 2007-09-21 12:22:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      dude this rap is way icy and chill. this fusion is o so swell.





    peace out yo





    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      nice job with this. it's an interesting contrast. i enjoyed this a lot (which you should consider a great compliment as i'm NOT a fan of rap).
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]



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