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    dots Submission Name: My strength is greatdots
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    Author: anile2
    ASL Info:    32/F
    Elite Ratio:    5.72 - 20/19/7
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 112
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 330



    Description:
       I dont think this is finished yet...but my mind has kinda gone blank on me...ughhh


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    dotsMy strength is greatdots
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    Your cancer of hate
    Can’t metastasize my soul
    My strength is great.
    Your judgments on me
    Can’t condemn my heart
    My love is great.
    Your deeds of anger
    Can’t beat me down
    My pride is great.
    Your devices of fear
    Can’t scare me
    My courage is great.




    Submitted on 2007-09-21 22:11:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Was a fair share of write, but I am distastified that you ended it the way it was ended. It was a rather a confident poem as it began, but I think you were disasitified in what it was becoming so you ended it. Or did you secretly leave it open ended. Please if it is not an open ending, which I really doubt. Complete it and I shall return with another comment.
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]



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