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    dots Submission Name: To An Angeldots
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    Author: DBE
    ASL Info:    16 - Male - UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 30/31/24
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 94
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1188



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        Please don't comment if you are looking for comments back - I simply use this site as storage for my poetry and do not often comment on other people's writing - so it would be unfair for me to ask for comments.
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    dotsTo An Angeldots
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    ~To An Angel~

    A****A,
    Beauty like yours,
    Is a blessing in this world,
    The radiant glow that surrounds you
    Shines brighter than a pearl.

    Eyes like yours,
    Are the artwork of a higher being,
    Magic in effect, emanating peace,
    Tinted in Hazel, but made simply for seeing.

    Hair like yours,
    So lush and so long,
    Perfect in every style,
    Never does it look wrong.

    Sweet is your nature,
    Amazing are your looks,
    What you are to me,
    Is what a diamond is to crooks.

    How do I describe Angel?
    This is an attempt,
    But words are hard to find
    When it comes to Angel - Heaven sent.

    Perfection: Defined.
    Notes: You truly are an Angel.
    Missing you more!
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    Angel made me turn red
    With something that she said
    Those two lines weren't supposed to rhyme
    But what's done is done, and it's not a crime.



    ...lol, don't know why I did that extra part




    Submitted on 2007-09-22 07:19:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i enjoy reading it... no need comment bk...
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 00:00:00 | by Plum | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is really lovely...

    Your Angel must be an amazing person...
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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