Ode to the Egg -------------------------------------------
Thin porcelain shell
of jewelers precision
holds the secrets
of new pending life
small universe lies
with-in clear skies
suspended in eternal time
lets look for a moment
at this delicate dish
taken for granted
from everyone's fridge.
please marvel the vision
Gods first decision
the incredible
edible
egg
Haha, very catchy. So much passion for such a little thing. I love it! The rhyme wasn't cliché at all, either, which is something I greatly appreciate. The ending was perfect as well.
That is fabulous...I love how you incorporated what seems like the egg's catchphrase.
I like the view you've taken in this...so many people take for granted that the substance that they're gulping down in the morning with their toast or something is just there for their benefit. It has the potential to be a living thing...there's something crazy magical about that.
Submission Name: Ode to the Egg
