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    dots Submission Name: A New Passiondots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 524
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 494



    Description:
       I need a new experience...


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    dotsA New Passiondots
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    I want a new passion
    I need a new love
    Another source of being
    A different type of drug

    I need a new obsession
    Another type of thrill
    A different destination
    Some other way to feel

    Give me a new religion
    A brand new song to sing
    Another morsel to taste
    Bring me ANYTHING!

    I want a new passion
    Give me a brand new desire
    Another state of being
    Set my soul on fire...




    Submitted on 2007-09-22 16:30:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It seems as though that you are bound by something don't let anything hold you back from finding out what it is you want. Sometimes it take a while to find what you are looking for because some people put on facades and try to trick you into believing that they are the one for you.
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      The image I'm getting from this is being trapped, and needing freedom, needing something new - to break out of the normal routine. I like it, it flows well and It's a feeling I can relate to.

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    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by DBE | [ Reply to This ]
      A vacation sounds good. Hmmm, how about climbing a mountain, going white water rafting, or getting together a bunch of friends for a camping trip. Of course, you could always try something tamer like painting, sculpture, or shopping. LOL---this one was just plain fun to read. I get bored sometimes, too. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Methinks the author is hungry and bordering on needy. We often hunger for the things that are never set in front of us.
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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