hehe, good stuff. this was pretty funny -- is that wierd? dunno, anywa -- i liked the rhyme a lot. i think it made it much more easier to take -- cause the message is so important and deep and stuff. it was great. good stuff.
I do believe I shall take your advice lest I end up frog legs on someone's dinner plate! Great insight in this poem. I enjoyed your abcb rhyme that was in all the stanzas except the second. If I may make a suggestion, using something like "Rip apart the shell" for line 6 would keep your rhyme scheme throughout the entire poem. Nice job, Sharon :-)
"Or else you're just a boiling frog"...now that is something I have never had the least bit of desire to be, in fact I've never considered a biling frog prior to the reading of this piece. I do agree with the sentiments of this piece...far too many are happy to just proceed on in their own brand of happy ignorance.