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    dots Submission Name: This is the partydots
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    Author: Thinkingofyou
    ASL Info:    18/f/The sunny state
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 283/423/132
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 839
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    dotsThis is the partydots
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    This is the party where those three girls get raped.
    Where no one can breath yet everyone lights one up.
    Where the each person knows this is the time of their life.
    And that everything they're consuming will break them in the end.
    Where the blow is so good that kids nose bleeds on the white carpet.
    Where the more you drink the better the music becomes.
    And no one even notices a 12 year old took the last shot.
    This is the party where you regret your teenage years.




    Submitted on 2007-09-22 19:04:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow...the utter decadence and disregard for everything in this state...you describe it perfectly.

    This is an amazing look at the way these things play out.

    This really makes you think, you know?
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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