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    dots Submission Name: babies and gentelmendots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 107/74/47
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 120
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 167



    Description:
       just a short little thing
    Im sorta loving and hating
    ITS NOT ABOUT BABIES OR THE MAKING OF THEM
    ignore the weird ass title


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    dotsbabies and gentelmendots
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    i need someone to lie next to me right now
    maybe for a cuddle
    the feeling of infancy has come over me
    but at the same time I want somethig sensual




    Submitted on 2007-09-22 19:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Not bad at all
    In the fewwords used for this write you showed us your readers just how difficult it is at time for us to find a moment to relax
    You also showed just how important it is for the human psyce to have someone to share life with
    Excellent Work
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes a sensual cuddle ends up being babies (ouch, twins). Smiling---I could not help but think about that fact as I read. Who doesn't like a good cuddle! Sometimes short poems say more than long ones. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it.

    Very simple, yet complicated in the thought of what you're asking for.

    It's an odd feeling.
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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