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    dots Submission Name: babies and gentelmendots

    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 691
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       just a short little thing
    Im sorta loving and hating
    ignore the weird ass title

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    dotsbabies and gentelmendots

    i need someone to lie next to me right now
    maybe for a cuddle
    the feeling of infancy has come over me
    but at the same time I want somethig sensual

    Submitted on 2007-09-22 19:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not bad at all
    In the fewwords used for this write you showed us your readers just how difficult it is at time for us to find a moment to relax
    You also showed just how important it is for the human psyce to have someone to share life with
    Excellent Work
    God Bless

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
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    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes a sensual cuddle ends up being babies (ouch, twins). Smiling---I could not help but think about that fact as I read. Who doesn't like a good cuddle! Sometimes short poems say more than long ones. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it.

    Very simple, yet complicated in the thought of what you're asking for.

    It's an odd feeling.
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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