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    dots Submission Name: Everyone's a Drunkdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    19/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 27/198/141
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 81
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    Bytes: 1072



    Description:
       Wrote these on a folded-to-hell piece of scrap paper I found in my purse on the way to the hospital yesterday. I saw so much and had so much built up in my head I was afraid I'd lose it.
    And the second stanza came from today.
    For those wondering. Yes, I do honestly think in metaphors. It's crazy.
    ----
    Story for ya. My sickness came back. I got a fever all random today. Headache from hell, acid reflux popped back up on top of me already feeling like a piece of shit and so I thought, well damn I guess I'll eat a cracker and make myself a fatass. But I'll only have one, then I'll have a cigarette and make myself feel worse! Yay!. So I was a-nibblin on that cracker and I stopped to rest my forehead on my knee to feel sorry for myself for not being able to spend time with Mr. Fish today and I looked at what was left of the cracker and it was in the shape of a heart! I didn't even mean to. And I stopped and thought "oh my god! what is this shit?!"
    ----
    And that just goes to show those that might think all, or even some, of my writing is just pulled out of my ass. Nope. It is all based on reality, maybe some is obscuritized (is that even a word?) to make it more poetic, but it is all truth and my truth, so there, non-believers!
    ----
    and to think, all I was originally going to put in this description was "omg, she finally wrote some lyrics again!"


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    dotsEveryone's a Drunkdots
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    Everything's a metaphor
    In this word
    Now there's a target on that telephone pole
    Next to the cemetery
    Where I spent most of my
    Middle-teen years
    With a friend mutually lost

    But I want to forget it
    I want to ignore it
    I'm done with thinking
    I do too much of it
    Cuz everything's a metaphor
    Everything a metaphor with me
    Everything's a metaphor
    And everyone's a drunk
    We've all got our poisons

    I've got a constant headache
    And chronic upset stomach
    Taking pill after pill
    Ate somethin for the one I love
    And my heart became saltine
    So fragile

    But I want to forget it
    I want to ignore it
    I'm done with thinking
    I do too much of it
    Cuz everything's a metaphor
    Everything a metaphor with me
    Everything's a metaphor
    And everyone's a drunk
    We've all got our poisons





    Submitted on 2007-09-22 19:31:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We've all got our poisons

    For real...I feel you on that one.

    I love the little story about the cracker...and the clever little way you incorporated it into the story.

    Very nice job.

    And I don't think eating crackers makes you a fat*ss...

    But I know chips do.

    Those are just my thoughts.

    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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