I walk alone in the world with no one beside me. no one cares for who i am no one cares for me. no one acknowledges that i am there they don't stop to say hi. and all ill do is walk alone till the day i die
Echoing silence, re-defining the bitter silence that is fast-paced lives walking past without real meaning. You have captured a painful reality on parts, and defined it in short and bittersweet lines.
"all I'll do is walk along til the day I die..." powerful ending, and good be a great quote. Powerful enough to stand on it's on, and powerful enough to make this piece intense enough to shake the foundations and thoughts of anyone.
Submission Name: walking alone
