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Something To Someone

Author: kession
ASL Info:    18~M~ok
Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115 /156 /63
Words: 210
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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poem to a certain know who you are!

Something To Someone

you had my heart,
from the very begining,
you were unlike,
so very many.

falling for you,
was so easy to do,
my world was so shaken,
i didn't have a clue.

you grabbed my heart,
and you held it tight,
you were on my mind,
all day and night.

i watched you go through guys,
one after another,
all of them were jerks,
but you kept falling over and over.

i was there for it all,
just as you were for me,
we were close,
just like friends should be.

i want to kiss you so very bad,
but i didn't do it, i held it back,
cause as much as i want you,
i don't want to lose you as a friend.

then you made promises,
that you could'nt keep,
as much as i wanted you to,
it's not something i need.

i'm not mad,
just very disappointed,
you got my hopes up,
then you ignored me.

i should've listened to everyone,
when they said you were a tease,
cause the more i'm around you,
the more i believe.

but no matter what,
we'll always be friends,
i just hope you realize what you have,
before it's the end.

Submitted on 2007-09-22 21:12:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  aww i love this! kiddo ur an amazing writer i wish i could write like this! i absolutely love this! deff. a fav!<3
| Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]
  Awww...sweet and sad at the same time...

I think this is lovely.

She is a foolish girl for not realizing what a prize she has before her.

Good luck
| Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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