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Study Hall

Author: Jan
ASL Info:    19/female/PA
Elite Ratio:    4 - 227 /251 /39
Words: 85
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Study Hall

The sound of a book, dropped to the floor.
A sound so common, we all heard before.
The sound of scratching pencils on paper.
The faint whispers and passing of notes we all savour.
The unforgetable look of a teacher's stare
towards those who misbehave or sit fixing their hair.
Towards those who are artists and draw in their books
trying to ignore the teacher's disappointed looks.
But when the bell rings then starts the chatter.
The pushing of chairs, the noise and the clatter.

Submitted on 2004-06-21 21:37:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this because it was original...
not many but the brat pack might right poetry about study hall. Keep doing your own thing, that makes you shine.

| Posted on 2006-07-05 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]
  I can relate I seen and heard to much of this in my study halls to but what I really don't like is that when the teachers stare at you or other people cause they always think that everbody in the room a trouble maker expecially in the office in the middle school. Give's me the shivers.
| Posted on 2004-09-11 00:00:00 | by Draco | [ Reply to This ]
it is just a memoir of the events that went through...
it is nice a total recollection my own class days.. oops i dont study anymore.. umm
it was neat.. pretty neat.. sud have had more to wite,... wat a peice..
i am really enjoying ur works
hope i satisfied ur request for going thro some of ur works..
n bye
| Posted on 2004-08-07 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
  Study Hall??????? We don't have study hall at my school...I don't think. God I better check up on that. It reminded me of my primary school. Especially the really annoying Friday afternoons.
| Posted on 2004-06-22 00:00:00 | by sadistchild | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked it and its rhyme scheme. but to me it was kind of fake, just because in my school when students have study hall, they get to leave, so hardly anyone's ever in class. but cool write overall.
| Posted on 2004-06-21 00:00:00 | by mallyland | [ Reply to This ]

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