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    dots Submission Name: another neverdots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsanother neverdots
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    another life lost
    befour it ever had a chance to live
    another child left behind
    that shale never be forgotten
    another love never to be loved
    another face never to be seen
    another pair of little hands
    never to be held
    another mother not to be
    another life without a chance




    Submitted on 2007-09-22 22:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awww...sad.

    Very sensitive subject...you did a good job of bringing it to light.
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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