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    dots Submission Name: forever didnt lastdots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    17/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 33/66/40
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 79
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    dotsforever didnt lastdots
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    a single rose lays on her chest
    as they lower her into the ground
    do not shead a tear
    for you are the reasion
    she called a blade to stop hers
    this is what she wanted
    this was her escape from
    the pain that consumed her
    do not cry for her
    for you will soon forgett about
    her shattered heart
    her love
    the broken promises you made her
    you promised her forever
    but forever didnt last when
    you walked away
    forever didnt exist when
    she ended hers




    Submitted on 2007-09-23 00:45:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's so sad. I can't tell, but it seems like suicide? But it's kinda irrelevant - it's still a great poem. You've take the concept of forever not lasting and portrayed it extremely well.

    Well done,

    DBE™
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by DBE | [ Reply to This ]



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