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    dots Submission Name: My purposedots
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    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 113/123/144
    Words: 131
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       I know, I need to revise this WAY much. When I say 'you' I don't mean one person I mean everyone. Yeah, enjoy.


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    dotsMy purposedots
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    my purpose in life is to make you smile
    nothing more and nothing less
    I wasn't meant to be with anyone
    All alone I am
    it was meant to be

    I want you to shine
    brighter than any star
    that's all I'm here for
    nothing more and nothing less

    I'll sing for you
    so we can connect
    you wont feel alone anymore

    That's what I'm here for
    To take away your pain
    to make you forget your worries

    I'll dance just for you
    will you feel my emotion
    my wanting to make you smile
    my tears are of joy

    My purpose was to make you shine
    That is all I'm meant to do
    I'll be a rose in your life
    nothing more and nothing less




    Submitted on 2007-09-23 02:11:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is lovely.

    I know what you mean here.

    But, if you feel that your purpose is to make others better, and you do a rather good job of it...at least you can feel as if you've done something...

    my purpose in life was to make you smile
    nothing more and nothing less

    My favorite lines!
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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