Sucky Feelings by emoxday

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Submission Name: Sucky Feelings dots

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Author:	emoxday
Elite Ratio:	3.16 - 113/123/142
Words:	20

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Longing
Total Views:	191
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	124

Description:
Haha, I made this awhile back.
It had more stanzas(that I didn't care for) but this one is the best. Enjoy.

Sucky Feelings dots

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What am I, defective?
What am I, a mess?
Please just start to like me,
Metamorph into the best.

Submitted on 2007-09-23 03:18:35 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  This piece is so good,
I don't think it is your best,
But why can't you include,
Any of the rest?

I can feel this, but it's so tiny. Feed me. Like MC White says, I think you should add to it.
| Posted on 2007-09-25 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it. I wish it was part of a bigger piece though. Maybe now that you know how you like the stanzas to sound you could make more like this?
| Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting.

Feels like it needs more, though.
| Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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