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    Author: rastas edible
    ASL Info:    32/m/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 10/10/7
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    would it make a difference if i was a madman, lost and stumbling, mumbling prophecy to pigeons and strangers

    what if i was royalty, kept alive by tabloids and sensational stories of whom i was fucking

    would it matter that i'm a loser boy looking for home far away, and love
    in strange women
    in plain women
    in sad, blue and hateful women
    who take me on as therapy and a release for their rage

    what if i built you a boast of stone...




    Submitted on 2007-09-23 14:46:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thanks for your comment:)
    i liked this; its very unique, and, um, poigent. pensive. the first line was my favorite, but i liked it all, and i like your writing style.

    SYnesthesiA_WaR
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by SYnesthesiA_WaR | [ Reply to This ]



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