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    dots Submission Name: Go To Sleepdots
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    Author: DBE
    ASL Info:    16 - Male - UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 30/31/24
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 100
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 395



    Description:
       Was a text message (SMS) that I wrote to Angel, decided to post it.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsGo To Sleepdots
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    If you said goodbye,
    Walk away before I cry,
    Because I wouldn't know what to do,
    Or where to go,
    Without you.

    Stay with me,
    Right by my side,
    And in my heart,
    Where you reside.

    If I were a sea,
    You would be my shore,
    Now go to sleep,
    I miss you more




    Submitted on 2007-09-23 19:14:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      lol i cant help but join every1 else in teh " awwwww" lol thats sweet whoever its about is definently a lucky person to evoke such feelings in you ya know. but all and all a good read short and sweet , keep em comming. Btw i'm No Talent check out some of my work if u have some time , peace
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by No Talent | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Sweet
    Angel is very lucky to have such a True Friend as You
    I Really like how you included you think of Angels Friendship even in sleep
    Great Job!!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Aww, wow that is so sweet. Definetly agree with Raivn, wish I could get one of these....
    Perfect little love poem.
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwww...sweet.

    I wish I got text messages like this.
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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