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Submission Name:
You II
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Author:
deranged shadow
ASL Info:
21/M/Niceville Fl.
Elite Ratio:
4.68 - 31/14/14
Words:
128
Class/Type:
Poetry/Dark
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Another dark day.
You II
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Can you read my eyes?
Can you sense the fury within my soul?
Do you feel the hair on the back of my neck?
You think you’re better
You think you’re awesome
You think you’re untouchable
My knife says otherwise
My fingers tremble
The task at hand almost crippling
This pleasure is mine and mine alone
The blood pumps
The shivers come
The numbing feeling presents itself
Like a cold night engrossing my body with its pleasurable pain
Ecstasy almost upon me as I slit your throat
The blood bubbles from your flesh
The silent scream from your open mouth
I live for your pain
You stared for so long
But now you stare no more
Because now your life is gone
Submitted on 2007-09-23 19:23:34
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I think you stanzas were a litte off
but the rhythm was good
| Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by
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