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    dots Submission Name: To Speak In Tonguesdots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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       I was listening to a person speak a language other than my own. without an interpretor. all I gathered was the intended thrust by the speaker's facial impressions.


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    dotsTo Speak In Tonguesdots
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    To speak in tongues
    is as an inane disciple
    in tryst to hide intended impulse
    that only The Spirit can interpret
    to conclude the obfuscated reason.

    We, yes we all, have tongues of fire
    asperging smoke as incense to the soul
    attentuated to its hot embers,
    flickering , in need of bellows
    to burn the thrust of words.

    Thus with all the tokened words of tongue,
    receivers must be enlivened
    to augment the aurora of
    words the auctorial whisperer unfolds
    lest speech become a dried up billabong.

    O,wondrous vib atickle the ear
    in nuanced dance of syllable
    directing its distinguish of joy or ire
    obliterating importune syllepses
    determined by the will and temper.




    Submitted on 2007-09-23 23:51:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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