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    dots Submission Name: Cry for nowdots
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    Author: swiftless
    ASL Info:    29/M/Ontario
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 12/6/5
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 704



    Description:
       My account of my own death as spoken to a true friend.


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    dotsCry for nowdots
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    It's ok, cry for now.
    Your tears are for me, but should they be?
    For now it's hard, but soon you'll see.
    so go ahead and set them free.

    It's ok, mourn for now.
    You're feeling empty and left behind.
    My body once vivid and one of a kind,
    no longer exists but within your mind.

    It's ok. Smile now.
    Miss me, but reject the fear.
    You know me still, I'm right in here.
    I know you feel im always near.

    It's ok. Grow now.
    You felt my soul in living years.
    My body's gone, you shed the tears.
    Accept my soul still holds you near.




    Submitted on 2007-09-24 09:35:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God I would like to have this read at my funeral. Its comforting without denying reality, beautiful. Nothing to improve.
    Josh
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]



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