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    dots Submission Name: A Dream to Realitydots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    20/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 46/117/99
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 110
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    dotsA Dream to Realitydots
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    Oh my, Alice.
    Why did you open up?
    You silly girl.
    You knew you wouldn't be loved,
    Nor could you love.

    ...Such a silly mess...

    The world as you know it,
    Wants to eat you soul.
    Use your mind,
    And destroy your heart.

    ...What a world I detest...

    Be a dear and fetch me that bottle.
    Which one?
    You silly girl.
    The one that contains the small,
    Round candy.

    ...Such a blessing, I can smile....

    Now, sleep.
    Sleep, my angel.
    And let reality take over.
    You are no more.

    ...Good Night....




    Submitted on 2007-09-24 11:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "One Of These Days", Meddle, Pink Floyd 1971

    Randomly 2 Reality....

    Smiles 2 Share =0 =0

    Don't take xXCptn

    Beatles, NOW, KuKooKaChu;
    sitting in an English garden
    waiting 4 the sun...

    love,peace,joy&smiles 2 share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Very dark but very well-written! I have no suggestions for improving on this post and hope to read more of your writing soon. Take care, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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