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    dots Submission Name: letter of hate (rewrite)dots
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    Author: dark figure
    ASL Info:    17/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 66/74/29
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 1049
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       i knew it was a bit outta whack so i changed it a little i plan to do this to other very soon but ill see how this one goes :D peace


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    dotsletter of hate (rewrite)dots
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    Iím losing again,
    I hate you.
    remember the times i stayed up late?
    remove your self from my life,
    before I remove mine.
    I hate you more then you could imagine,
    more than any human modality could portray.
    how could I have ever loved such a repulsive thing.
    you...
    donít deserve that tongue for you have told a thousand lies,
    each one of them have broken my life
    you spineless whore be gone from this place.
    I despise your very existance
    I hate you so much I hate my self
    for i helped you fuel your lust to add to your wealth...

    this will change nothing as nothing has changed.
    and you will always be the same,
    for this aspect of you I hate you more

    yours faithful I wish you were fucking dead




    Submitted on 2007-09-24 15:26:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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