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    dots Submission Name: theese words (mean nothing) rewritedots
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    Author: dark figure
    ASL Info:    17/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 66/74/29
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotstheese words (mean nothing) rewritedots
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    Know your there but i feel the distance,
    seperated by miles of land as cold as ice as hard as life.
    I know your there but you secice to be of existence,
    repressed to a place i cant reach you so close but i cant see.
    If i wanted to be alone i wouldnt need your assistance,
    spite filled like a glass of water spilling over the top slowly dripping down the sides.
    i was lookin for the path of least resistance,
    a road with many paths a choise so hard to make.
    my love will be for ever dont worry about the consistance,
    but time is against us....




    Submitted on 2007-09-24 15:38:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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