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Distance is Nothing


Author: manwithnoname
ASL Info:    18/M/Ontario
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Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I wrote this little prose poem after reading "Nothing can separate us" by charmedidentity. It was such a beautiful poem she wrote that I just had to write something myself.

You should definitely take a look at her poem after you read this.


Distance is Nothing



Distance is nothing,
nothing but air.

Our love is everything.
Every waking moment surrounds us with unity.
Every waking thought screams your name.

Distance, nothing to be feared.
I hear your smile,
your eyes,
your soul.





Submitted on 2007-09-24 17:07:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Only one who truly knows this situation could be so moved by this poem and.. It honestly makes me want to cry.
| Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by bonita2689 | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful,.... its each word is beautiful.


I hear your smile,
Your eyes,
Your soul.

This poem celebrates the invisible bonds that transcend every conceivable hurdle... the greatest distances lie in the mind, in the sense of distrust or insecurity, once these feelings are banished from the inner realms, there is no distance, no fear...

Once again i say, this is purely beautiful.

| Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
  Allo,

I had already read charmedidentity's poem "no one can separate us" When I saw your comment, I knew I had to read this poem I love how the love between two people can't keep them apart, even when physically, they could be across the world from each other. It reminds me of a little something I found awhile ago:

"If you love someone more than anyone, then distance matters only to the mind, not the heart."

Your poems just reminded me that no matter how far apart we are, two people are still united by the bonds of love Thank you for this post - I hope more people read your work

-Sere
| Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by Lil Sere | [ Reply to This ]


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