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    dots Submission Name: foolish lovedots
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    Author: my_worst_fear85
    ASL Info:    22-F-NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.23 - 124/83/49
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 137
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    Bytes: 983



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    dotsfoolish lovedots
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    I could lay in your arms forever
    The warmth of you body
    Pressed up against mine
    The feeling like I’m in love again

    Making love is paradise with you
    Taking me far away from reality
    Feeling you, surrounded by you, inside and out
    I know I belong

    We see the realness of our souls
    Personalities so entwined and bare
    What bitterness we had disappears
    Leaving nothing but the moment

    But it’s hard to face reality
    There will never be an “us”
    Differences stand in the way
    With egos too high

    Your scent lingers on my skin
    When your time comes to leave me
    And I’m always left holding my heart
    Once again on my sleeve

    But every chance we can spend
    Enjoying each others worlds
    Keeps me holding on
    To you, to me



    To cjf <3

    9-24-07





    Submitted on 2007-09-24 18:45:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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