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    dots Submission Name: a whiners prayerdots
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    Author: rastas edible
    ASL Info:    32/m/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 10/10/7
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 113
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    dotsa whiners prayerdots
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    i can't subscribe to fantasies simply
    because i've been emptied
    because i've been toppled
    because i've been scalded
    because i've been born, scorned, and left
    to discover suffering and winter cold as the diamonds in her ears...
    but i may subscribe to fantasies because my tongue will never again be cooled by her stones and i will continue to grow feverish...




    Submitted on 2007-09-24 20:32:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "born, scorned" and "discover suffering", subtle awesomeness.
    | Posted on 2007-09-26 00:00:00 | by Camo Star | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm another good ending and the title is creative
    this is probably my second favorte of yours
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by SYnesthesiA_WaR | [ Reply to This ]



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