In Memory of Robert Jordan by Shadows Life

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Author:	Shadows Life
Elite Ratio:	4.4 - 127/127/27
Words:	135

Class/Type:	Poetry/Lostfriend
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Robert Jordan was one of my favourite authors and the news of his recent death touched me deeply

In Memory of Robert Jordan dots

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Sorrow,
Swiftly carried by wailing wind
Mourning the passing of the dawn
And the dying of the early morning light

Echoes,
Reflections etched within the soul
Portraits of the rays of sun
As the world slips into night

Where are your words to lead the way?
Where is the Dragon that breaks the night?
Where is that herald of the day?
Where are the banners of the light?

Emptiness,
A fleeting memory passing by
Withered by winters touch
As the world falls to the blight

Tears,
A weeping sigh across the breeze
A tribute of remembrance lost
A silent prayer for sweet respite

Where is the master of the hearth?
Where is our herald of delight?
Where lay you now beneath the earth?
A fallen warrior in the fight!

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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