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    dots Submission Name: In Memory of Robert Jordandots
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    Author: Shadows Life
    Elite Ratio:    4.4 - 127/127/27
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
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       Robert Jordan was one of my favourite authors and the news of his recent death touched me deeply


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    dotsIn Memory of Robert Jordandots
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    Sorrow,
    Swiftly carried by wailing wind
    Mourning the passing of the dawn
    And the dying of the early morning light

    Echoes,
    Reflections etched within the soul
    Portraits of the rays of sun
    As the world slips into night

    Where are your words to lead the way?
    Where is the Dragon that breaks the night?
    Where is that herald of the day?
    Where are the banners of the light?

    Emptiness,
    A fleeting memory passing by
    Withered by winters touch
    As the world falls to the blight

    Tears,
    A weeping sigh across the breeze
    A tribute of remembrance lost
    A silent prayer for sweet respite

    Where is the master of the hearth?
    Where is our herald of delight?
    Where lay you now beneath the earth?
    A fallen warrior in the fight!




    Submitted on 2007-09-25 01:25:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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