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    dots Submission Name: It and Theydots
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    Author: Angel_Sin
    Elite Ratio:    6.96 - 20/26/30
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsIt and Theydots
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    It and They

    move along
    live among
    dying stars
    silent whispers
    crawling, creeping behind
    translucent walls of eternity.
    Tic Tac Tic Tac...
    The gutter swallows another soul
    the earth spurts in its wake
    all that should stay and blossom

    It and They
    go along
    carry among
    forgotten poets
    blighted side streets
    with a breath of renewal
    hidden beneath nature's palm




    Submitted on 2007-09-26 03:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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