It and They

Author: Angel_Sin Elite Ratio:    6.96 - 20 /26 /30 Words: 63

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It and They

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It and They move along live among dying stars silent whispers crawling, creeping behind translucent walls of eternity. Tic Tac Tic Tac... The gutter swallows another soul the earth spurts in its wake all that should stay and blossom It and They go along carry among forgotten poets blighted side streets with a breath of renewal hidden beneath nature's palm

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