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Molecules


Author: Deep Ace Thinks
ASL Info:    35/M/ Spring, TX
Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 124 /190 /60
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Molecules



Somewhere beyond cold earth and dry sea,
swim molecules of something we intended to be.
Two halves of one perfect yet incomplete whole,
with infinite equations undisclosed by the soul.
Somewhere concealed under what was and what is,
lies daybreak and darkness within hers, without his.
Somewhere between should I? , or could I? , decide,
dwells proof beyond doubt, that time is not on our side.




Submitted on 2007-09-26 09:16:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this!
It makes science sound so interesting!
I love your rhyming and the visuals.
Your choice of words were great.
A cute little poem.

Though I didn't understand this part:

"Somewhere concealed under what was and what is,
lies daybreak and darkness within hers, without his"

But otherwise it was nice, thanks for sharing.
| Posted on 2007-09-26 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]


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