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    dots Submission Name: A Poem about Grassdots
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    Author: never_far_away
    ASL Info:    18-female-TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 105/90/53
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 448



    Description:
       Just a poem i wrote for creative writing class...i was sitting in the grass...so that's where i got my inspiration.


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    dotsA Poem about Grassdots
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    The soft green carpet
    On which I lie
    Holds much intent
    To make me cry

    Over the rolling knolls
    It continues to flow
    Without any restraint
    It bountifully grows

    I lie here endless
    Looking to the sky
    Watching the clouds
    Fly slowly by

    I run my fingers
    Through each blade of grass
    Hoping that time
    Would slowly pass




    Submitted on 2007-09-26 11:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the subject you wrote on here, very smart on coming up with something out of nothing.
    Great write!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      Nature itself is poetry, isn't it? Your verse proves that so right, when nature is muse, it always creates one of the finest works.

    I loved this verse of yours. It has a sort of calmness in it, exactly what you must have felt when creating this. I think it's a beautiful poem and do keep writing.

    Take care
    -v
    | Posted on 2007-09-26 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]



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