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    dots Submission Name: Pretenddots

    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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    i could starve myself
    and still be fat
    change my hair
    and turn it black
    cut my wrists
    and watch them bleed
    smoke cigarettes
    and smoke weed
    wear cute clothes
    that don't fit
    laugh at jokes that i don't get
    pretend to be everyone's friend
    and they turn their back again
    put on make up
    and dye my hair
    still at me
    they laugh and stare
    think i'm pathetic
    think i'm gross
    still at me
    they laugh and boast
    i can pretend i've got what they've got
    but why pretend
    i'm something i'm not
    why wear a mask
    when they all look the same
    why play their pathetic
    pretend game
    when all they're going to do
    is reject and never accept you
    why should we pretend
    and wear a cheap disguise
    put on a stupid mask
    and hide behind their lies

    Submitted on 2007-09-26 12:37:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good poem! We shouldn't put on that mask and hide behind their lies.

    Smiling...there are more of us than there are of them! Keep on penning and do be true to yourself.

    :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-26 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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