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    dots Submission Name: O this RINGing! instantdots
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    Author: manwithnoname
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ontario
    Elite Ratio:    5.84 - 314/278/117
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       this popped into my head as I was drying my hands in the washroom with one of those air dryers. Another poem styled after E.E. Cumming


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    dotsO this RINGing! instantdots
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    O this
    RINGing! instant

    I only hear
    the sound of dry
    hands the music
    in my ears

    Hushed! Out of
    exist
    ence

    (I must get to class
    and COMM
    unicate)




    Submitted on 2007-09-27 07:36:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice expression of miscommunication, lack of communication and dysfunctional communication ... these things cause much trouble and lead to a broken exist



    ence.

    Very innovative.


    PS: This is my interpretation, it may be off the mark but anyway i like the style.
    | Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmm
    this seems very different to me
    i cant be sure if i like it or not

    i will have to think on that


    e e cummings is quite an aspiration
    good luck
    | Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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