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    dots Submission Name: BATTLEdots
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    Author: SKillz_Heckle
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Tha BRIARWOOD!!
    Elite Ratio:    6.02 - 268/173/39
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 317
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    Well well well, back in the saddle again
    with your closed mind, ready to battle my friend
    you sent me warning of your inevitable return
    but you fighting me, you have alot to learn
    the world turns as your ignorance is displayed
    the last time we fought I watched your blood cascade
    You're lies served only as fuel for my thirst
    my thirst for vengeance, YOU made it worst
    I could've twisted your fucken head right off
    but instead I beat you with my words
    but not because I went soft
    because I need no violence toward you anymore
    I do love you, but I'll forgive you nevermore
    and as I think my wretched thoughts
    my decrepit plots, my process stops
    I remember who you really are
    you're Skillz Heckle.....my only star.....




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      wow talk about a twisted spin at the end...

    I loved the flow of this write...it was like a roller coaster ride, intense and fun.
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]



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