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    dots Submission Name: Somewhat to a Queendots
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    Author: concrete_rose
    ASL Info:    31/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 43/52/34
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This was kind of a personal poem but I feel that people can relate to it on their own accounts.


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    dotsSomewhat to a Queendots
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    I was once compared somewhat to a queen, equipped with eyes of hazel to burn extreme; holes in the soul of another whom is cold to me.

    I was mean't to be born on a cloud, sprouting wings at a young age observing their growth, until I took flight onto the earth.

    If anyone should know their future it should be me; so i could pick out my own compatibility, and waste no days washing the hands of time.

    If there were no responsibilities I would only sprout babies, and find a lover keen and knowledgeable to bask in the sun, drinking red wine until our loins went numb.

    If I was immortal I would tell everyone who ever lived, to respect diligence, intelligence and to carry flavor; their own essences never to waiver.

    But when I die I shall call on, seeds of daisies to grow up round my hair, And you shall know where to find me there.




    Submitted on 2007-09-27 22:33:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is like that ruth of being a woman
    spring and being adored ...i can see how this is close to your heart and to me it shows that you have a good addittude about yourself ... you like you ...and thats a good thing ...good write ... my fav parts were :

    ....and waste no days washing the hands of time.


    ....seeds of daisies to grow up round my hair,

    bloodstone
    | Posted on 2009-08-13 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]
      hey!!
    I realy realy like this write!!!! i like the flow and "rhythm" of this write!!!
    this write had my attention right when i started reading all the way throught the end....
    good write!!!
    feel free to comment on my writes as well!

    xxkatexx
    | Posted on 2007-09-29 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]


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