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    dots Submission Name: Little Boydots
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    Author: SnakeBite7
    ASL Info:    17/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 87/132/57
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 112
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1140



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       Can you get what I mean? Have you ever seen this person?

    It's not what you think, consider, and really think.


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    dotsLittle Boydots
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    I saw a little boy today, full of life, full of heart.
    His emotions were there, his feelings were pure.
    No secrets, no mystery.
    I saw a little boy today, crying, tearing, fearing.
    Fearing what he didn’t want to do, not what he didn’t know.
    He knows everything without knowing anything.
    I saw a little boy today, he passed me by without a single glance
    Yet we have seen each other before, in years past.
    I’ve seen him every day, but he’s never seen me.
    I saw a little boy today, except he’s not so little.
    He is grown, tall, strong, but still a child inside.
    For he will never grow inside, nor would I want him to.
    I saw a little boy today, surrounded by people.
    People that love, people that care, or perhaps people that don’t.
    But he doesn’t either, so long as they’re there.
    I saw a little boy today, in the reflection of the morning mirror.
    He’s afraid of what he doesn’t know, of what he can't see.
    Of growing old, of being alone.
    I saw a little boy today. Turns out the boy was me.





    Submitted on 2007-09-28 01:32:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that there is one in every person because little boys and little girls are more attached to the most basic of needs than those who strayed years far from their birth. And that part of us, that inner child, is what keeps us hungry for life and ultimately it is what keeps us beautiful.

    But yes, I agree in a sense that we shouldn't let that inner child run amok. Otherwise, we wouldn't be able to accept the realities that lie before us.

    I think that the simplicity of your construction worked decently. It gave a clear perspective of what needed to be said and it erupted in such a way that you blantantly had both hands on the reader's cheek.

    So yes... you do have a solid one.
    | Posted on 2007-09-29 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]
      I read this once.

    then read it again.

    I can't even comment on it, because I keep discovering new levels and depths that this poem can go to, and yet with each one, I know that there are more. That there is still another explaination and meaning behind it.

    brilliant.
    | Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by Dimension_X | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok so when i got to the last line and read i thought to myself 'I knew it' and smiled.

    So from your note I assume that even though the last line pretty much explains the poem, it actually doesn't or at least not accurately or fully.

    My thoughts are that yes a part of you is the 'little boy' you always were and always will be, but i feel as this was written in a time ascending manner....what I mean is that the beginning were younger years, and as the poem progressed so did the 'boy' grow up physically.
    | Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by bas | [ Reply to This ]



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