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    dots Submission Name: drinkingdots
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    Author: mandy dupuis
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 109/138/57
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    When its two am , and your drunk again
    can you see through your smoky eyes
    Can you clear your mind enough to realize
    You give away your heart to the bottle of moon shine
    you give your lungs to the smoky bandit song
    One drink was to remember, but the other was to forget
    Thinking eventually you'll stumble yourself to your bed
    Taking one more drink, you say you'll move soon,
    Another drink and you soon forget the reality,
    Springs popping underneath the worn chair
    You take another drink, you're pride is gone..
    Your barely here, or there.
    Light a joint, forget you have kids..
    Light a joint, we are all grown up
    You only remember us at Christmas
    We are born to die, you seem to forget
    drinking kills you faster, but loneliness causes death...




    Submitted on 2007-09-28 12:37:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really sad
    You spoke very wellinthis write reminding your readers alcoholal and drugs do not just hurt you but those around you
    Excellent Job!!!
    Thank You forsharing this very important write
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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