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Sheer Misery That Killed Me


Author: EmeRalDEyeZ5491
ASL Info:    16.female.Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 130 /137 /105
Words: 96
Class/Type: Poetry /Sorry
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Sheer Misery That Killed Me



i'm sorry i lied
when i whispered my promises
to never let you go
to have you until the inevitable
took you from this earth

i'm sorry i cried
instead of coming up with solutions
to our problem
when fate started to crumble
and shook our promises

I'm sorry but i tried
to keep you from leaving
i begged, pleaded and died on the inside
please know how much it killed me
to say that final goodbye
as i looked straight in your eyes
before walking away that final time

I'm sorry




Submitted on 2007-09-28 15:42:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I know what that like. You feel so shaken inside but you will rise above it. I enjoyed this piece it was really good and brought back memories. Good write.
| Posted on 2007-10-01 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
  ummm can you say WOW! this is amazing! I'm am seriously speechless about this one. yea. I suck compared to this. I think this is going to be a favorite. yea most definitely.


your loving sister.
| Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]


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