Sheer Misery That Killed Me

Author: EmeRalDEyeZ5491 ASL Info:    16.female.Ohio Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 130 /137 /105 Words: 96

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Sheer Misery That Killed Me

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i'm sorry i lied when i whispered my promises to never let you go to have you until the inevitable took you from this earth i'm sorry i cried instead of coming up with solutions to our problem when fate started to crumble and shook our promises I'm sorry but i tried to keep you from leaving i begged, pleaded and died on the inside please know how much it killed me to say that final goodbye as i looked straight in your eyes before walking away that final time I'm sorry

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I know what that like. You feel so shaken inside but you will rise above it. I enjoyed this piece it was really good and brought back memories. Good write.

| Posted on 2007-10-01 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

ummm can you say WOW! this is amazing! I'm am seriously speechless about this one. yea. I suck compared to this. I think this is going to be a favorite. yea most definitely. your loving sister.

| Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]

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