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The cold wind makes the morning tremble
The day promises to be a cold one
Lost in a land where trees have no leaves
They're a metaphor for me without you
and you without me.
I shiver on the streets, hoping you'll turn up
Around every corner I see
Hoping you'll notice me first and surprise me.
So I look around,
but you're nowhere to be found.
Only the cold wind carresses me
| I like what this piece has to say and I hope you offered great thanks to siradrian for the editorial help.||| Posted on 2007-10-06 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ] || The metaphor is a neat one and the whole works rather well. However there are a fewe bloopers in terms of spelling:|
leeves should be leaves
chiver should be shiver
metaphore should be metaphor
carresses should be caresses
"trees as no leeves" should be "trees have no leaves"
|| Posted on 2007-09-30 00:00:00 | by siradrian | [ Reply to This ] |