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    dots Submission Name: Wondermentdots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 492/502/133
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWondermentdots
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    Random thoughts, random dimensions -
    coinicidental meetings,
    a soul wondering -
    the randomness of life;

    A sweet slice of the past visiting - briefly,
    singing those old songs of hopes,
    when dreams became real,
    this heart felt a child-like innocence,
    a few moments of past birth - probably;

    a different her,
    a new this self;

    This calmness overwhelms many,
    a quietness fills up her soul,
    Dear God! let her sleep
    for a while
    in this randomness of your miracle.




    Submitted on 2007-09-30 05:04:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We are creatures of complex emotions, even more complex for poets and writers, methinks! This poem does well to "stop time" at a moment's emotional reflection (ie let this mood and feeling last forever)!! We are all passing each other in eternity, which includes the present! No wonder that we can't but reflect what might have been had we simply chosen to "turn right instead of left, or take the right fork in the road instead of continuing on"! This is an excellent reflection on moods and thoughts that we all have! Nicely done, Vedanta!
    | Posted on 2007-09-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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