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    dots Submission Name: little mirrordots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotslittle mirrordots

    little mirror
    imatation glass
    no weapon here
    makes the face destorted
    how appropriate
    i should not be here
    though i do belong here
    with these other wounded
    the fake strong
    the hellos are easy
    the goodbyes are hard
    i hate when live plays like a movie
    teh words seem rehearsed
    theey are im sure mine are
    no reaason to linger
    this room wont make it easier
    i have to face my pain

    Submitted on 2007-09-30 18:50:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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