Au cinema -------------------------------------------
I've spent lifetimes in lifelines;
piplines calm, Oily palms placed.
As Trepidating falanges trace
venus mounds,
I'm bound by the sound of her heart beat
sneaking peeks between fingers sleek
She smoothly arched into a steeple
To dwell in her church my finger would purge their prints
hands clasped indifferent to individuality
As we finish watching the movie
This has some good metaphor, well it is a metaphor in every way. And my guess is that the title means you'd like to get it right in the first take.
Love takes care and caring. I believe you've got it right here, Dave.
I don't think this piece is for everyone. The language is subtle and if I didn't know better, I'd say it all began with an innocent
massage. If I asked for more details, I would be prying.
I prefer to have my own experience of this type. But this was definitely crafty and I enjoyed peeking in, just to see how you managed the description, of course.
Submission Name: Au cinema
