Nice! not too revealing, just the right amount of expression and description.
I like the lighthearted feel this has and the declaration of your willingness to give up all just to touch her.
'Toes folding in prayer' < pretty neat/unique description. I like it.
I also like the give and take of the fourth part.
Her coyness in not wanting to be referred to as a goddess, made an interesting ending.
Perhaps in S3 L1 it should be "lain" instead of "lied"?
The first time I read it got the impression that the write was unfinished or that it left something to be desired. Then I read it a couple of times more and decidedly changed my mind.
I usually shun pieces that depict sex coz I just donít enjoy reading them or somebody's private affairs, for that matter but I did like yours because you are quite honest and sensible and your descriptions are sweet and romantic. You never mention any sordid detail which could shock or annoy the reader.
I like your careful choice of words which is where the strength of the poem lies. I love the rhythm which helps you convey the message effectively and touch the reader at the same time.
One suggestion would be to add some punctuation in order to see where the stress is placed. Other than that I'd say it's a very fine piece.