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    dots Submission Name: Lost in Drugged Silence [desc.]dots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    19/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 27/198/141
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 94
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Don't comment unless you want to. I'm tired of bothering you guys with my worthless creative writing shit. This is SHIT. I wrote it in five seconds in a rush with no idea what the fuck I was doing so yeah. Don't feel inclined to do anything. Ok? ok.


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    dotsLost in Drugged Silence [desc.]dots
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    Silence, swarming silence and it was deafening to the ears. It seemed almost drug-like. What those colours did droning in and out like a pulse in the ripped up wallpaper. But he had to remind himself it was only noise... or lack thereof... such silence... murderous silence. A silence that could blind like an attempt to shoot up heroin through the eye. One couldn't have taken too much. He almost overdosed, or so it seemed... on silence, the surrounding silence. The purple and blue, cold silence.
    It was lacing its lying fingers into his shoelaces and tying them; one by one with its black fingernails. The young twenty-five year old lay at the end of his rope in a cold sweat with a silent syringe in his sickly thin arm... such deep acidic silence, yet so sweet. Footsteps so alien yet so familiar echoed out of the failing walls. What happened that night? Was it morning? His eyes were shutting so slowly like that silence. Who had stopped the music anyway? Oh yes... the band had left with the chemicals.
    So it was silence... and then it was darkness...




    Submitted on 2007-10-01 13:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First of all: I know commenting is low, but calm down. No need to get crazy

    Second of all: I'm here to comment.

    Sometimes I wonder what possesses people to try drugs. "Oh, it'll just be fun. I'll do it once and that'll be it." Ha! Soon they are down a road of destruction...

    Neat little piece. Interesting to see a person's sensations and perceptions while they are taking drugs. And so eerily silent. I kind of like silence sometimes. But
    I, like the character, can feel this silence like a weight. So quiet that it is overbearing. Doesn't happen often, but when it does, I break out the tunes.

    Hee hee, colours! Drug colours pulsing in and out like a slow strobe. And who is that one-armed man? AAAAH!

    And no, this piece is not bad at all. I don't care if you wrote it in five seconds or in five hours, it is still good. The reason we post on this site is to be positive and constructive, not pessimistic and insane. Yes, I know a lot of people aren't commenting. I'm getting a little frustrated myself. But I am determined to be a good ES member and pull my weight. And be positive and helpful.

    | Posted on 2007-10-01 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]



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