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    dots Submission Name: Somberdots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 858



    Description:
       This is another one of my new style poems. I know it may have flaws in it but i'm working on it. It's about a girl who had a serious crush on this boy who had the same on her but they never did anything just talk back and forth but the person she was wasn't really her, hint the "bitch".


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    dotsSomberdots
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    It's you
    you are the reason
    the soul cause of this
    this war, this fatality, this nonsense.
    Why must I drowned in your presence
    every time you are mentioned every time you are thought of?
    The perpetual bliss that became
    my fantasy slowly set in as a reality
    and out war had just become harder.

    My nights intolerable
    my days unmentionable
    as my brain fought with my heart
    I was finally seeking justice.
    He made me the bitch I now have no clue of
    how I became her
    a crazy insane jealous bitch.

    So this is how it ends
    no words no contact
    just silence and peace?
    Where did all the fighting go
    where did the bitch go?
    Unbeknown to me she is still here
    hiding deep within seeking vengeance.




    Submitted on 2007-10-01 22:45:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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