leave the light by brokenbylove

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Submission Name: leave the light dots

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Author:	brokenbylove
ASL Info:	20/m/australia
Elite Ratio:	1.47 - 60/202/175
Words:	49

Class/Type:	Poetry/Venting
Total Views:	88
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	285

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leave the light dots

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im sick of this fight
always trying to find the light
maybe i should give in to the dark
let my soul spark fade
let my heart die inside
let myself go, just finish it
let my mind find the answers
to all the questions left behind

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