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    dots Submission Name: On Love's Fair Isledots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 714



    Description:
       finding love is the grandest search for the most precious gem, tiny and fragile but burns like a star when there is a spark


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    dotsOn Love's Fair Isledots
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    Lost at sea I swam ashore,
    to a forgotten realm,
    now pure lore.
    I found you there to rescue me,
    on Loves' fair isle,
    for eternity.
    And from this grand grace,
    a flower blossomed,
    joy's radiant face.
    Upon one day dark storms grew,
    night's shadows grasp
    firm around you.
    Driven to and fro by your fierce gale,
    through my heart you drove
    a mighty nail.
    Life slipped out with times knell,
    one final breath, with that
    final bell.
    Now I lie on Love's fair isle,
    a doomed creature from
    your beguile.


    October 1, 2007





    Submitted on 2007-10-02 00:55:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      im not quite sure how i feel about this
    it has a nice tone, a fair rythm
    just not what i care for

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-10-02 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]



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