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    dots Submission Name: Is It Love?dots

    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Idk what this is
    just a poem about mixed feelings i suppose

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    dotsIs It Love?dots

    waking up next to you
    feeling your warm embrace
    being told im beautiful
    looking at the smile upon your face
    your gentle kiss on my forhead
    your arms around my waist
    is it love? is it not
    or is it all a game
    walking down the street
    your fingers entwined in mine
    feeling my stomach go round and round
    a feeling i cant deny
    ive never felt this way
    i guess this is what u call love
    but is it love is it not
    or is it all a game
    its only been two weeks
    but its feels like ive been with you forever
    no other man in my life
    could possibley treat me better
    i think i love you
    i think its true
    but wud you be scared
    if i said i love you

    Submitted on 2007-10-02 08:16:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is really good, i like the way it plays out the ending is not what i expected but it makes total sense. trust me guys scare easily when it comes to love, but good write. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-10-02 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem...great job..
    | Posted on 2007-10-02 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]

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