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    dots Submission Name: Love You For This....dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Spoof/Love
    Total Views: 807
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1278



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       To my Truest Love!!!! Dave I cannot see myself without you. You are truely A-amazing ;-)


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    dotsLove You For This....dots
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    I look into your eyes and I know no matter what.
    No matter what God has in store for us
    You'll forever keep me safe.

    And I love you for this.

    When I see you smile from ear to ear,
    because I'm singing my usual crazy way.
    I get these butterflies in my stomach,
    knowing I can make someone feel so good they smile from ear to ear... Makes me smile!

    And yes Baby, I love you for this.

    And even when my eyes swell with tears at times, you…
    You being my Friend, Lover, Husband, and My World...
    I know you are always going to be the ONE to whip them from my cheeks

    And yes... My Love, I love and adore you for this.

    no matter what
    no matter the time of day
    no matter where I may happen to be.

    You Baby are always with me
    Always on my mind!

    You've got me smiling more than you know!
    You’ve got me all choked up on my words more often than you think.
    and most of all… You’ve got me falling in love with you all over again every single day I get to look into those green eyes of yours.

    I love you, and I'm all yours! Forever...never ending!




    Submitted on 2007-10-02 16:07:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Awww, anybody with eyes can see you and this person are made for each other. But I'd like to see a blind person read this, haha. Get into contact soon. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats beautiful Jackie
    | Posted on 2007-10-11 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      wow!

    you are the new Tandang Sora.
    | Posted on 2007-10-09 00:00:00 | by cheeno_d_luffy | [ Reply to This ]
      How lucky is your husband! This is very touching and tender, and a wonderful tribute to the man in your life! It reads as though it came straight from the heart!

    Nice work, Jackie!
    | Posted on 2007-10-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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